“I had a complete novel I’d given to beta readers, but I knew the story and writing weren’t quite there yet. Ali took my manuscript, and she reviewed it with detail and enthusiasm. Her manuscript review process was thorough and considered from all aspects. She studied the plot, discussed areas I could flesh out and made suggestions to strengthen the characters and elevate my writing at the sentence level. Her conscious and in-depth process helped me take a raw manuscript and advance it to a level where I felt proud to send it out. Ali’s passionate and enthusiastic notes and guidance clarified my task list and provided a path to a polished novel. Her detailed post-analysis report included an assessment of the theme and description of my novel that I used in my querying package. I recommend her manuscript review services to all my writing friends who know their book could be better but are not sure what their manuscript requires for success.”